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Change: Editing of the Program for Economic Crisis document was finished (April 11, 2009). The final result is a pdf file attached to the Outreach Literature page.Program for Economic Recovery — jalp’s annotated draft (Thu 4/2, 12:47 pm EDT) / draft v2 (Sat 4/4, 11:47 am EDT) Economic
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Apr 4 2009, 11:52 AM EDT
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Change: [total PC-counted words in “main draft v2” – without, and not counting, the notes: 38 + 53 + 80 + 66 + 91 + 13 = 341 words] [=============== [end of jalp's draft] ===============] Thanks for the input from Art and
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Apr 4 2009, 11:50 AM EDT
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Change: We need to withdraw all US forces and contractors from Iraq and Afghanistan immediately. We must also stop subsidizing Israel's oppressive occupation of Palestine with money or weapons. US diplomacy and aid should provide the world with the basic needs of living, not the latest means of killing. [notes:
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Apr 3 2009, 7:50 PM EDT
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Change: people,people makes no sense for the future. We need a sustainable, community-based economy. And we need grassroots democratic control of the resources of society. Nationalizing
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Apr 2 2009, 1:09 PM EDT
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Change: could change “between depends on” and “makes no sense” to just “depleting resources and degrading people,”] * could replace “depleting resources and degrading people,” with “depleting energy and other resources, and degrading people and the environment,” . . . * could replace “for the future”
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Apr 2 2009, 12:56 PM EDT
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Change: : It’ll take a lot of work to build a Green, healthy economy for Michigan. And that means a lot of jobs for everyone, at
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Apr 1 2009, 5:19 PM EDT
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Change: 2. A Green public works program -- jobs for everyone at a living wage -- rebuild infrastructure, schools, create and support public spaces, gardens, organic farms – all as part of a Green program of revitalization and economic crisis.conversion for Michigan. We aremust emphasize energy
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Mar 29 2009, 6:47 PM EDT
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Change: Below is my attempt at editing/rewriting (358 words). We still need a headline, maybe a pithy slogan at the end. I thought it was important to specify exactly what we are opposed to, and to emphasize saving energy as the way to lessen dependence on fossil fuels, imported or homegrown.
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Feb 3 2009, 7:54 PM EST
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Change: There were only format changes (bold, italics, etc.) in this version. See this version for details.
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Change: 2. A Green public works program -- jobs for everyone who wants to work at a living wage with full healthcare and other benefits --
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Change: Created by Feb 3 2009, 7:52 PM EST for: no reason given
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